Friday, September 24, 2010

A Mars Slim Can...

I have some friends that really enjoy Hip-hop, but they lack the ability to write lyrics that flow. So I used to write them lyrics, this is one of the verses I wrote for them (probably my favorite). They actually still come over to jam quite a bit... I play the drums and we make fly ass beats. Anyways, enjoy!!

    It's a beautiful thing life is, such a pity we only get to live it once,
though some believe in reincarnation, I could never believe that philosophy,
for my minds on vacation, determination, to avoid reality...
Like the wind in my hair its gone in a second, like the water in a stream, that gleams in the sunlight,
the light that we let shine on our skin to give us a light to look up to when we fall down, to the ground,
that caress's us so carefully, detrimentally, in a sense, but when we scream out in agony we know the moment's only a memory, fighting it's way into the depths of our mind, just to leave it behind,
for another day to reminisce about how we almost pissed ourselves crying, trying, defying, rectifying,
how unjust it was, and how the earth could just bust us up, then we remember how we healed, our life once so concealed, but then it opens up and we blossom, feeling so awesome, its like "nothing will stop'em!", but then we get set back to reality, the memory like gravity... you know it's there but you can't grasp it.
So just breathe in the air and let the water soak your skin, let your body loose to the rhythm and syncopate your feet with the beat, feel your heart pound with every sound, watch your sweat drip down to the ground and land so profound and just Remember that nothing lasts forever so whatever the weather, for better or worse, a moment is not a curse, so live by this verse.
JD 4/15/10

29 comments:

  1. You should produce it and put it on youtube, its awesome, and check this out

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  2. thanks for sharing this, also like the background of your blog

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  3. interesting blog. will read in the future.

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  4. Love the blog!! check mine out too!

    http://www.innovatedmotions.blogspot.com/

    will continue to read!

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  5. I actually like when people have the smarts to be able to lyrically define themselves. Unlike those bastards who just talk shit and can't write for their lives. I respect you, bro. Keep it up.

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  6. i agree with desowave.. music should be art.. not 16 yr old faggots with bowl haircuts rhyming to beats..

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  7. It's a beautiful thing life --- true

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  8. not bad at all

    pretty good actually.

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  9. I would love to hear a recording of this...

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  10. interesting shit u have here bro,great blog

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  11. Truthfully, I didn't read what you wrote, But I'mma leave you a comment for the hell of it :D

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  12. I agree with the guy who said you should put this on youtube. Sounds pretty cool.

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  13. Just doing my round on my favourite blogs i come later too see whats new come to see ym blog
    click

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  14. hip hops alright, you gotta choose the right artist though

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  15. fuuuuck. i cant even come up with like 4 lines. this is good!

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